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Pledge Of Love
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Pledge Of Love |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I have found my healing Here tonight in your eyes They shine with love Holding no hidden disguise The way was so long My journey was rough The ends that I’d go to for this Just don’t seem to be enough Somehow the road Led me here to your side In your honest true heart I willingly confide I profess my love To heaven and earth All hear me say You’ve given life worth My prayers have been answered God Himself sent you to me A living breathing sign Of all that has come to be I have paid the price Enduring what came No longer do I have to play Those awful shallow games The time is upon us To look to the future now Sincerity and honesty Are our solemn vow We’ll worship our God Giving glory and thanks For one day we’ll see Him On Jordan’s prosperous banks Ours will be a partnership Of man and wife Joined together eternally Our love will thrive I pledge to you From this day on The happiness you feel Has only just begun All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wonderful pledge and devotional to the one you love..a nice read and nicer thoughts... |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Beautiful, Lone Wolf. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a beautiful promise ... with promise  Well done. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-12-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
what a very lovely sentiment, LW. gentle smile, may all your days be filled with such wonder and happiness |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Nice. The promise of love, is the best of all. Melton |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Love is such a splendid thing. Beautifully written. "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful write of devotion, LW...thanks for sharing this promising outlook... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This should be in a book of devotions, it is wonderfully woven!  Kathleen Blake |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is beautiful, Jennifer.....so tender and full of love. Wonderfully done. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cpat Hair: Thank you much, they just kind of came to me this afternoon. Tovi: Thank you! Interloper: Now I just have to find someone to give it to, then I'll be all set. Logan: I hope and pray they are, my friend. 2dalimit: It sure is and nothing can conquer true love. Secret Whisper: Amen! snowpants: You are welcome and we all need a little hope in our lives. Hate to think of where we'd be without it. Kathleen: Aw, I am blushing here. Thank you, sweetheart. Someday it may just be. Elizabeth: Thank you! All writing comes |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful... Loving Feels Honest Connie Kinda like wedding Vows |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Zinsser: Yes, very much like wedding vows. Perhaps one day I'll get to say them to someone special. Thank you! All writing comes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sound like you've given your troth. 1derful! |
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