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I'm a Powerful Merlin
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I'm a Powerful Merlin |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This is a rather simple attempt........ I hope you would enjoy it all the same  ~*~ I'm a powerful Merlin ~*~ I’m a powerful Merlin if you only know I can enchant you eternally And never let go Yes…..Sir I have the magic of centuries To help me to see The truth that you might be Hiding from me I can cast a spell on you And make everything true I can make a hundred incantations and more To make you knock my door Swim to my shore And reach for the life of me That you know too well How could it be  I have the most enchanting melody To tempt you to remain by me I have all that it takes, sir… To have you alway Night and day To make you stay To make you choose my way I’m a powerful Merlin if you only know Don’t doubt it , sir I have many powers to show Never challenge me , sir Never make that mistake Or With the incantations I can make I’d forever bound you to me With a power no one Can shake…..!!! ***************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simple....not! Wonderful? Yes! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And who is not enchanted with stories of Merlin.... nice poem.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If this is simple, I'd love to see what's difficult. . .  I really liked this one, of course, I'm always a sucker for Merlin, but the thought of you being the Merlin, makes it even more fun to read. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I found this completely enchanting! Loved the cool graphics too! Perhaps you'd like to write an incantation with me sometime? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was very neat!! Nice job!! All writing comes |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
A "complete" attempt. A true love holds no bounds. Good read. Melton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, it must be unanimous of two Texicans like it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedMelody~ You wove a wonderful spell ! Enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~dear Sunshine~ I'm really glad that you liked this one Thank you dearst ****************** Cpat Hair Indeed who is not enchanted with Merlin's stories.......... Thank you for reading it ******************** Dear Sven..... Thank you dearly for liking it and for such an up-lifting comment.........and yes, I'd like to be a Merlin.......  ********************** serenity I'm thrilled that you found it enchanting.... and sure.......I'd be more than glad to write an incantation together...... but on whom should we use it? ********************** Lone Wolf Thank you for reading it *********************** Melton..... (2dalamit) Thank you dearly.......for seeing it as a "complete" attempt......and for reading it ************************ Interloper and I am really happy for that Thank you ************************ dear ~*Marge*~....... Thank you for the lovely comment and for stopping by to read it A big thank you for all of you from ...  for such encouraging heart-gladdening responses ****************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Hi there ,well it |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
HI |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
How many times I have said "if only I had a magic wand" Your words are far superior to mine. Loved it. |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
How many times I have said"I wish I had a magic wand". You say it so much better than I. Loved it. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Romeo........ Hi.......Welcome to Passions........ ********************** autumn....... Indeed, how many times have we wished to have a magic wand........... Thank you for such a sweet comment *************************** It's only me.......only me |
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