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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-06-12 10:27 AM

do not question

when you look for me
   it is this you shall find
though in body I not be
   it is I who dwells your mind

the promise that was given you
   that I might always be
has been kept here in my heart
   truth, I am always here with thee

think not that there be no skin
   that I dwell not here, within
no face to touch, no arm to cling
   seek your soul, therein I sing

look back ‘pon our first meet
   feel again our lips in greet
and seek remembrance of embrace
   feel again soft hand to face

do not question our intent
   when passions rest heavy, spent
for thy love is why I exist
   in the memory of thy kiss….

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-12 10:31 AM

Beautiful ... musta been some kiss

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-12 10:36 AM

lovely style and wording... a great read and very well done

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-06-12 11:11 AM

very beautiful...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-06-12 11:25 AM

when you look for me
   it is this you shall find
though in body I not be
   it is I who dwells your mind

the promise that was given you
   that I might always be
has been kept here in my heart
   truth, I am always here with thee
=================================

my oh my....
color me envious ...
then believe when I say --
I wish I had wrote this.

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-12 01:07 PM

ahhhh. . . now this, I like. . .

well done. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-12 04:10 PM

Oh, what a great piece of writing!! Excellent job!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-06-12 09:23 PM

'look back ‘pon our first meet
   feel again our lips in greet
and seek remembrance of embrace
   feel again soft hand to face'

Excellently written, Decaflame...I love it...

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

8 posted 2001-06-13 09:59 AM

Interloper....a poem is a poem is a poem....thank you!....

Cpat, the lovely is most appreciated, thank you....

Thank you Wynter....

JanetMarie, there is almost no finer compliment....thank you little one....

Sven, it likes me, too....thank you....

Lone Wolf....I've seen better from you...grace us again....

snowpants, that particular part pleased my heart as well, thank you....

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