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Open Poetry #14

Murderous Sunrise

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-12 08:55 AM

As the knife edged day
Begins to bleed red along
The bloodline of sunrise
Night’s pinpricked points
Fade into scars across
Heaven’s skin.

Morning’s zephyr breaths
On breasts of green
That rise above mercurial
Pools now shrouded in
Early mist and dragon fire
Reflections.

Witnessing this murder
Of darkness, I am in awe
at how beauty is created
by passing time…
and change…

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-12 09:02 AM

Wonderful!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-12 09:41 AM

Murder of darkness or birth of a new day? Interesting perspective.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2001-06-12 02:10 PM

Witnessing this murder
Of darkness, I am in awe
at how beauty is created
by passing time…
and change…

death is but a transition. Some great images here,

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-12 02:14 PM

Wow, this was a very unique perspective. Nice job.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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