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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2001-06-12 02:10 AM

When Forever Holds Your Hand
~*Marge Tindal*~

When forever holds your hand
and walks you to the promised land
know that I will follow with my heart

When no more we can touch
yet I'm missing you so much
know that I will still remember you

When memories come to call
remembering you were my all
I will hold you in my heart
when forever holds your hand

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-06-12 02:14 AM

I will hold you in my heart
when forever holds your hand

Geez, Marge, sigh, and you say I plucked the heart strings...so very nice, gentle lady...gentle smile

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-06-12 04:59 AM

Marge..... a wonderful poem of loyalty and devotion! That's quite the picture!
Well done as usual!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2001-06-12 06:23 AM

Margie girl, What can I say this is amazing, truly awesone Margie dearest heart sister. Oh how I love this, utterly brilliant.

Take care
Love and warm stuff
Mushy

:loveya

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-06-12 06:27 AM

Truer feelings were never written for I carry those with me daily, and thank you for strengthening the memory of them for me and for a wonderful man held dear to my heart.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-12-2001).]

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-06-12 07:31 AM

this is absolutely wonderful

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-06-12 07:36 AM

so beautiful Marge, you always know how to touch my heart.

((hugs))
Charisma

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-06-12 09:05 AM

very soft and filled with memories... very nice indeed...

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-06-12 09:39 AM

Forever ...

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

9 posted 2001-06-12 10:32 AM

This was beautiful Marge...

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

10 posted 2001-06-12 10:51 AM

When forever holds your hand
and walks you to the promised land
know that I will follow with my heart

When no more we can touch
yet I'm missing you so much
know that I will still remember you

When memories come to call
remembering you were my all
I will hold you in my heart
when forever holds your hand

============================
Oh....Marge.......just beautiful
you have warmed my heart with that

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When forever holds your hand
takes u to a far away land
Remember dear
that I would always be near
------------

Thank youuuuuuuuu
***********************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2001-06-12 10:59 AM

Marge--Thank you for this lovely poem this morning...brought my special memories to the surface with a smile. Hugs!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2001-06-12 11:00 AM

*smiling at you*
this is lovely Margie...your hearts shines in every line

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

13 posted 2001-06-12 11:10 AM

Marge, you are awesome, as are your shared thoughts....

thank you!

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

14 posted 2001-06-12 11:38 AM

This is beyond beautiful, Marge, and truly awesome. I knew it was going to be just by your title. Loved this.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

15 posted 2001-06-12 12:32 PM

i dig the originality and the last two lines are a blast!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2001-06-12 07:03 PM

Logan~
Yes ... the melody played so softly in my mind.
Thank you.

ETHome~
I am so pleased to share a little slice of my heart in verse.

MarshaLove~
You know that I love you too.
*Hugs*

Mysteria~
Sweet friend, the memories are meant to strengthen us
... and they do.
*Hugs*

KelliKay~
I thank you so much.

Charisma~
My heart touching yours gives mine another smile to wear.

CPatHair~
I so appreciate your response.

InterLoper~
Yes ..... forever.

KitKat~
Thank you so very much.

EnchantedMelody~
Again, I am so pleased to know that my thoughts
would touch the heart of another.

Martie~
A smile is what I wore when I penned it.
A smile of sweet remembrance.
Thank you, Sis.
*Hugs*

SweetJanetMarie~
You give me wonderful smiles with your reply.
*Hugs*

DecaFlame~
I so appreciate you ! ! *Hug*

Saunni~
I am pleased to know that the title drew you in ...
It landed right in my inkwell and flowed from there.

Kaile~
My friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

*Much love and thanks to all of you for
such heartwarming replies.
You make it a great day to be a poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-12-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

17 posted 2001-06-12 09:07 PM

Marge~ there you go again...tiptoeing across the beaches of my heart.....

so beautifully done!

saving this.....

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

18 posted 2001-06-12 10:04 PM

I'm not often here anymore...but it is always a joy to read others muse. Beautiful as always Marge!!!!

Take Care,
Bridgette

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

19 posted 2001-06-12 11:21 PM

Margie, now this is deeply beautiful, it's definately a keeper!

Take care,
Melissa~

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

20 posted 2001-06-12 11:50 PM

~Sigh~ holding forever....I like the way this made me feel....thanks for this Marge....

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2001-06-13 06:18 AM

SEA~
What a nice place to be. Thank you, sweetie.

JustBleu~
So nice to see you here again.
I appreciate your reply.

Melissa~
I am really pleased you enjoyed it, my friend.

GreenEyes~
I sure like sharing *sighs* with you.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

22 posted 2001-06-13 01:30 PM

smiling.......I enjoyed this so much. You touch my heart with your words Marge. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

23 posted 2001-06-13 06:08 PM

Absolutely beautiful Marge. Wonderfully crafted by your lovely words, as usual....Sue

Suetang

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

24 posted 2001-06-14 01:14 AM

GentleSpirit~
Thank you. I like knowing that.

SueTang~
I always appreciate your replies.
Thanks so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

25 posted 2001-06-14 11:56 AM

The shining heart that you possess,
and open arms ever in open invite
and forever spraying friendly smiles,
Speaking words that give much needed respite.

....

Your words mean so much, my friend... please keep writing forever... yes, forever...

Regards, Marge,
Sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

26 posted 2001-06-14 12:05 PM

Amen Marge, a wonderful poem of devotion I enjoyed it very much Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

27 posted 2001-06-14 07:28 PM

Oh, Sudhir~
My friend, what a lovely, lovely thing to say.
*Hugs* and a smile here for you !
Thank you soooooooo much.

OLIAS~
Thank you very much.
It pleases me to know you find enjoyment in what my heart writes.

*You all are just the greatest ! !
What a perfect day to be a poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

28 posted 2001-06-15 01:46 AM

Margie,
so eternally astounding, soft and promising forever.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

29 posted 2001-06-15 06:39 AM

Kethry~
Thanks, hon.
Softly forevering is such a pleasantry to possess~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

30 posted 2001-06-20 11:21 AM

Marge-
so glad i found this one
in my attempt to 'catch up'..

you know i love it..

love ya,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

31 posted 2001-06-20 01:33 PM

What a beautiful promise of devotion that's eternal... Lovely!

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

32 posted 2001-06-20 02:02 PM

Marge

This is sooooo very beautiful
Thank You
Connie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

33 posted 2001-06-20 04:36 PM

Vicky~
I am so glad that you found it ...
and even more pleased to know you 'loved' it.

SuthernGal~
Thanks sooooooo much, sweetie !

Zinsser~
I'm pleased to know that you like it so much.
Thank you for letting me know.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

34 posted 2001-06-21 07:06 AM

Margie girl, sending this back to the top, so it can shine brightly as a beacon.

I really do love this one, you have written such a wonder here
Take care
love as always sister of my heart
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Michael

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Posts 7666
California

35 posted 2001-06-21 07:38 AM

Allow me to say Wow! I loved this, Marge. So many people only find grief when Eternity calls one dear - but this shows how unnecessary that has to be. Beautiful poem - and lovely graphic, too.

Michael

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

36 posted 2001-06-21 10:12 PM

MarshaLove~
Thank you, sweetie !

Michael~
Very pleased to find that you enjoyed it, my friend.
I thank you for the reply.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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autumn
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since 2001-06-08

Posts 44
Maine

37 posted 2001-06-22 07:11 PM

So beautiful!!!!! Thank you for sharing. It touched a special string in my heart.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

38 posted 2001-06-22 07:14 PM

Autumn~
Thank you so much for enjoying the symphony of my heart.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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