Open Poetry #14 |
poem - cliche? |
PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
i suppose everyone who does poems tries this at least once. maybe it fits the "cliche" thing. love is an oasis to cool you when life gets too hot steamy, dreamy nights when outside it's not the softest of hands to wipe a tear from your cheek and silent smiling eyes when it's quiet you seek all the little things that weigh more than life and, if you let it an end to your strife |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but it is how you string them together.... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I do not believe there is anything new...to be written..but new ways to write it...abound.... |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was lovely! It touched my romantic heart : ) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
reading this just plain FELT good! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ok I admit, I love it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with sunshine ...you've made them interesting by the way you put them together! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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