Open Poetry #14 |
True Life Lessons |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
True Life Lessons when I was six years old I learned a lesson one I will keep with me forever forgetting it never my grand pa was the president of the bank as was his father before him as I played on the porch beside him he had agreed to take a meeting with a local man the man he spoke with stood with his hat in his hands clutching it with white knuckles he spoke softly and slowly but his voice kept floating in and out I heard him speak of his family and the land of his fathers it was the first time in my life I had seen a grown man cry the two of them danced on the porch for awhile then the man left grand pa sweetly smiled and picked me up and placed me in his lap then said “girl, I just taught you a lesson you will never forget the true life’s lesson is… how you hold people in your pocket” kissed me on the forehead then he put me back to play grand pa… no disrespect but I disagree with you it’s not about how you hold people in your pocket it’s how you hold people in your heart "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
He did teach you the most valuable lesson of all, how to make up your own mind in what you believe, and what is in your heart...well said, well done...gentle smile |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Life's lessons...all in how you look at it. Your observation is the one I agree with. But I imagine we would be in the minority. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The difference is he was a banker and you are a poet! I really enjoyed this and I have to say you got the lesson imbeded in your heart the right way! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
excellent! Kathleen Blake |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Do unto others as you have them do unto you. The heart is the key. It holds lifes greatest treasures. You say it so nicely. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice lesson to have learned.... nicely told and a read I will remember |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
exactly. . . well told helen. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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