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Instigating Incentive -- Isis Inspiration Challenge
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Instigating Incentive -- Isis Inspiration Challenge |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 when only three lines of inspired write visit my page, you appear as the fire beneath these fingers, the electric charge behind my lazy psyche, the exterminator of reticence for my apprehension to the canvas... you are the underlying rhythm of my rambling tongue, an unruffled nucleus in this chaotic loop, the subtle strait of sense to my drifting impatience, the steady cadence for my erratically pulsating core... when my receding dreams have lost their luster, you are a rainbow of stimulation plastered across my sky, the alleviation of a newborn day after a nightly siege, the mind-blowing exhilaration of newly-awakened hope... somehow, along the way, I have rolled into you, the scorch of red searing my energy gone blue, swift motivation behind my anxiously lost direction, the tolerant recuperation of my lacking attention span... I just opened up my eyes...you were staring straight back, branding into my soul your name of integrity, your relentless sense of stability opposite my shifting strength, your butterfly aptitude to spark my interest in a brand new life... -kh 06/11/01 I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Oh my, how wonderful, great pic, great words. You do this so very well, SP...gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the subtle strait of sense to my drifting impatience, the steady cadence for my erratically pulsating core... when my receding dreams have lost their luster, you are a rainbow of stimulation plastered across my sky, the alleviation of a newborn day after a nightly siege, the mind-blowing exhilaration of newly-awakened hope... ========================== I just opened up my eyes...you were staring straight back, branding into my soul your name of integrity, your relentless sense of stability opposite my shifting strength, your butterfly aptitude to spark my interest in a brand new life... ========================== well thats one hell of an inspire my friend... and one heck of a vocabulary too... put them together..dress them up in imagery and you have a classic SP poem... way cool Kris...well done. she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for this!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Snowpants this is brilliant! It goes beyond inspiration some how ???? Challenge met and then some my friend.. Sorry not to reply sooner, I've been ill.. Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Snowpants, there are just no words to describe the excellence of this poem! Echo all of the above and what is yet to be said! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow!! Awesome write, sp.  All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ This line was worth it all ..... 'somehow, along the way, I have rolled into you' I LOVE that thought ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Logan: thank you, my friend, for your kind reply...I am glad you liked it! JM:  ...well, I am officially flattered...thank you for your unfailing ego-boosting, m'friend...I am happy that you liked this...  Kathleen: well, you're welcome! thank you for reading! Isis: oh, don't apologize...thank you for the challenge that could spark some verse out of me! I'm glad you liked it! Tier: well, then, you have said a lot...thank you much, my friend... LW: thanks! glad you enjoyed... Marge: why thanks! thanks for stopping by and I am happy you liked this... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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