Open Poetry #14 |
Our promised land |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I won't promise that you won't get there, you've been there before. But I'll take you very slow, no hurry, no pressures, no goals. In my hands, you'll find bury pleasures that last. In my body, you'll find all the warmth you want. We'll integrate our spirits, loving each other's souls. When you're ready we'll arrive, simultaneously to our promised land. |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Oh, my....a pound of severely melted Godivas! Wonderful. theLadypoet "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always wanted to go together. . . great job walker. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Sharing love is grand. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Sharing love is grand. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love this...very passionate writing. PM |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"in my hands, you'll find bury pleasures that last. In my body, you'll find all the warmth you want. We'll integrate our spirits, loving each other's souls. When you're ready we'll arrive, simultaneously to our promised land." That's beautiful stuff my man! Great philosophy in this one1 The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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