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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-06-11 05:14 PM



I won't promise that you won't get there,
you've been there before.
But I'll take you very slow,
no hurry,
no pressures,
no goals.
In my hands,
you'll find bury pleasures that last.
In my body,
you'll find all the warmth you want.
We'll integrate our spirits,
loving each other's souls.
When you're ready we'll arrive,
simultaneously to our promised land.



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theLadypoet
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since 2001-05-28
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1 posted 2001-06-11 05:24 PM


         

Oh, my....a pound of severely melted Godivas!

Wonderful.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

Sven
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2 posted 2001-06-11 06:10 PM


I've always wanted to go together. . .  

great job walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223

3 posted 2001-06-12 12:40 PM


Sharing love is grand.

thecraig
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4 posted 2001-06-12 12:40 PM


Sharing love is grand.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
5 posted 2001-06-12 12:46 PM


Love this...very passionate writing.

PM

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2001-06-12 05:32 AM


                                        "in my hands,
                                you'll find bury pleasures that last.
                                        In my body,
                                you'll find all the warmth you want.
                                   We'll integrate our spirits,
                                    loving each other's souls.
                                  When you're ready we'll arrive,
                               simultaneously to our promised land."

That's beautiful stuff my man!  Great philosophy in this one1

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

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