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Until Then I Dance Alone
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Until Then I Dance Alone |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ Until Then ~ I Dance Alone ~*~We kissed in the first light of morning; We danced in the swirling mists of the night. Holding each other we swayed like the willows, Our two souls became one, entwined ever so tight. In a soft summer breeze you now whisper my name, I see your lips in the kiss of each pink rose in bloom. The garden itself seems to be now in my favor, As I imagine songbirds singing our favorite tune. I look upon the sun as it rises from its hiding, From beyond the mountains in its golden glory, Through the trees and rain, I think I hear you calling, Your voice within thunder echoes of our love story. I wonder do you dance with the stars in heaven? Will I ever be able to find you and kiss again? I am so alone and empty without your embrace, My love, my heart and my soul are in endless pain. For we danced to the music of two loving hearts, Filled with passion, hope, and such infinite love, Until you were taken from my arms so suddenly, Now I just cry at night to the heavens above. I can only pray that you know I am still waiting, And that our dance to the music of love will never end. I will be held in your arms when the time is right, But for now, I dance alone, and to you my love I will send. art: William Whitaker "In A Santa Fe Garden" music: Hymnhope ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very beautiful Mysteria! Soothing, flowing sentiments wrapped in tender sadness for a lost love, just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Beautifully sad.......carrying so much longing.....evoking so much....... and again.......your selection of the picture and all is just sooooooo beautiful. Thank you ******************* It's only me.......only me |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very romantic and flowing..an enjoyable read filled with love.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, It's an old song but you sang it beautifly. Sy |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
So sadly beautiful write, Mysteria...very pretty graphic, too...I really like this... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kit: Thank you for your kind comment. My Enchanted Melody: I am glad you enjoyed the package, I loved the picture too. CpatHair: Thank you, I am partial to love actually, a rather staunch romantic. Snowpants: So glad you enjoyed it, as it makes doing this so much fun. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, sooo sad but sooo beautiful! You sure can write, Girl! Wish I could say it like you just did! Great write as always! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Saunni: Shucks was nuttin! I spy with my little eye a picture, and the words come from the heart, nothing to great about that really, but thank you, (a hug too). ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, the sadness comes so vividly through, the love left for the one gone, leaving the empty shell that hopefully will be refilled, for such tenderness should not wither like last summers rose...wonderful write as usual, Sharon...gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Logan...ever the romantic, thank you sir! I have too many thorns to wither like a summer rose ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful.....lovely piece. enjoyed the wonderful piece. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Okay, lady ... I was okay until the music started ... then the tears came with it. *sniffles* Almost too pretty for mere words ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Charisma: I smile as you liked it. Marge: I adore that piece of music and unfortunately I know it makes mem cry every time I hear it. Vandana: I am glad you enjoyed it, thank you. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
the wonder of your pen never cease,i dont know how you do it but everytime you write it tells so wonderfully the story of the picture and i enjoy it so  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Watersign6: You know - I need to buy you a shirt says"Best Passion Poetry Supporter" because you truly are a dedicated reader, and good for you! Thank you sweet one. |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
~*~huge sighs~*~ This was so deeply touching and very beautifully spoken, Sharon. Found myself wiping a few tears here...you must remember how important those "tissue alerts" are to me...(smiling) An incredibly embracing and deeply moving message...I LOVED IT! Hugs and much love to you, always, dawn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dawn: I am gonna get you a towel rack that fits around that cute Texan neck of yours it will sure save money on kleenix! *winks* |
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