Open Poetry #14 |
Rain Drop |
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Rain Drop Come little rain drop bring us your relief We all live day by day assured in our belief That you will come and deliver hope through rough and darkened sky And not destroy what things we have with the amount that you supply Bring your gentle touch turning nature green Do not drive us away with your tempest seldom seen. So please little rain drop leave us some dry ground All the world loves you when you spread yourself around Author Mr»ÄlleÿÇät copyright © Ed Schmidt 2001 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love the touch of rain drops inhere, but hey only in this lovely poem as I need the warmth of brother sun's sunbeams. Excellent write. Charisma |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, a wonderful write, indeed! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hi Mr AlleyCat, I recognize your name from The Poet's Place, nice to see you here. Yes, we don't appreciate rain the way we should. Corinne |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Mr. C this poem is a pound of Godivas and a raspberry torte cake. I love rain and I love this poem. theLadypoet "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Nicely written rhymes, Mr. Alley Cat...I enjoyed this... sp I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
I can understand this! I live in California, and drought over the past years has caused almost as many problems as flooding. This year it looks like drought will be the catalyst to many fires. We hope it won't be too bad! Hope you get your rain! Esclandre |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Thank you for the kind words, I really enjoy reading what people think, and helps with the directions I should go Thank you Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
nice pitta patta poem |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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