Open Poetry #14 |
soul. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
soul, world-weary and battle-scarred, fly across the planes of time and existence to find a gentle haven in my love take rest now from the keeper of this lonely inn of life and find that your trials are not in vain that they serve only to strengthen you rest here for a moment or for an eternity here, in this place, they are one and the same but, no matter how long you take your refuge here you will emerge as does the phoenix from the ashes of her death proud strong alive you will leave this place ready again to face the trials of life with power, wisdom and knowledge and soul, you will be loved for the keeper will know your name a name he has longed to hear the name of love ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Knight, I have sought thee, and find...still the search...continues.... Know that I am aware of the Lady....and she still seeks thy word.... speak to her soon....she awaits..... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great format and a great write Sven....much enjoyed! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*~* b e a u t i f u l *~* in form and word. love it. Charisma |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Oh, Sven. Very nice indeed. Hugs, Tammy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely indeed Sven..enjoyed ~Victoria~
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is very nice, Sven. I also like the way you formatted it for us. Michael Proust- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Enjoyed the read. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh John, this is most beautiful. Someday I would dream of having this kind of love. It is a special person that writes this. Sandra |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How beautiful, John, like a prayer from above... corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Decaflame, the Lady will need wait no longer, for the Knight has indeed heard her call. . . ethome, thank you my friend. . . Charisma, thank you for reading my friend. . . Tammy, thank you very much!! Victoria, thank you, glad that you enjoyed. . . Michael, I've been having fun with this format. . .it seems to make it look and read in a different way . . . thank you. . . Sy, thank you. . . Sandra, I know that we all do. . .and it will happen, for all of us. . . thank you. . . Corinne, here's hoping that the prayer is answered. . .thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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