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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-11 08:35 AM

Let me now…
Sweep the stars from
Heaven’s orb with
The wave of my hat
And capture again
The jewels lost to God
When you came to earth.

Presenting them
one…
By
one…
As you sit and
sort for brilliance,
and size,to string
Them on threads
Of finest hope,
For the Moon to wear
In her nightly dance.

Let me then…
Wander in the vast
And unknown depths
Of your eyes
As I once again attempt
To touch the stars…
And capture the
Beauty I see
In you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-11 09:03 AM

This....is absolutely wonderful, and is following me directly to my library....

I do so love collecting keepers....

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-06-11 09:13 AM

oh how beautiful written....loved it very, very much.

Charisma

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-06-11 09:31 AM

Goodness, you could certainly sweep a woman off her feet with this one, swoooooooooon, sigh ahhhhhhhhh.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-12 03:06 PM

Beautiful imagery in a well woven piece. I enjoyed the read immensely.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-12 03:10 PM

*sigh*....what more can I say?

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-12 08:37 PM

now I know how this feels. . . I've captured the stars before. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

7 posted 2001-06-13 08:53 AM

A beauty well captured...in words!

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

8 posted 2001-06-13 11:16 AM

This is simply gorgeous! I would melt if a man wrote this for me.

Mark
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 18

9 posted 2001-06-13 11:26 AM

Such beauty expressed. Very nice writing.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2001-06-13 11:43 AM

Cpat--

As I once again attempt
To touch the stars…
And capture the
Beauty I see
In you

You have captured it well!

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