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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
Angry man wanting justice the abused woman crying alone White man beating the black nobody notices the blue sky dying. Custer’s men of blue uniform killing the red savage ones But custerd is yellow so much red spilt over the blue. Green finger man shouting aloud dirty children picking his roses Bored of muddy waters because of the clear coloured glass. White nose man higher than the sky so high he’s in black space As the purple rain falls on the radio the colours start running. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this one is very unique and makes one think which i truely enjoy plus it has a strong message behind it too  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
VERY COOL POEM!!!! clever employ of imagery and message... humanitys colors should run together like a rainbow Welcome to Poetry Land nice to have you here  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
good use of the colours here. . . I like it. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You took the rainbow, and gave us the humanity of...us... thank you! |
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