Open Poetry #14 |
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...............Reaching.................. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Reaching in thirteen count he wrote “descending”, I in reaching never downward, wanting to emulate in reaching for I go across, or up, but always, I’m reaching for one thing, happiness, in this quest, I am reaching for life and living, in continually reaching for pursuits well beyond my grasp, but still, in reaching I feel the beat of wing, the well of Hope, for reaching allows the stretch of mental limbs, for in this reaching I am self-teaching to never quit in my reaching and with five lines to go, my finish line is reaching out before me, I, gasping, strides marking this reaching of soul’s goal, wonder if I shall expire, reaching out for this destiny I have prescribed in my reaching for this last line, hoping now to find you come reaching. thank you Poet Dave Smith. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Yes, Sunshine, I will reach with you, as I am always reaching after learning that as I grew old, I was very ignorant indeed, so reach I do, and hope to learn just a bit of the world...gentle smile, nice thoughts, nice pondering. enjoyed very much |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Interesting and full of strength. Sandra |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
thoughtful poem, unfortunately i don't reach out enough. pres |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this poem is very inspirational and makes me think and that i enjoy,thanks Sunshine ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
May we always reach...there are things that do not exceed our grasp.. |
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Nathaniel Shain Junior Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 35 |
I shall always reach, for in the reaching there is always hope and new horizons yet to see. Enjoyed this much! Nathaniel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This IS inspirational... Thanks for your poetry... Regards to you, Karilea, Sudhir |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
that is why we have eyes and ears and minds... to always be seeing or hearing or thinking of those things we can not quite in our current state touch... nice device and form.. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
may I reach with you, as we are never to old to reach out for life, Hope and so many more. Thank you for sharing these inspirital words. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
There is no thing on earth that rays of sunshine can't reach... wonderful write. Poeminister |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dearest sister of my heart, and I will say that in reaching out you have reached for my hand and I hope will always drag me trailing behind. Content to always be in Sun's shadow. Where the light is tender Fabulous writing as always dear heart Take care Love as ever Puck ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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