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Open Poetry #14

Warm Thoughts

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-06-10 11:16 AM

Wondering about life can be
shared by someone,
wondered today
the sushine has brought me
memories,
Warm thoughts of you and me,
In my mind,
Wind blows harder,
just the few warm thoughts
of you and me,
Brand new day
to shine my eyes away,
with these thoughts of you
and me,
The rainbow has been there
for you and me,
Seeing so many colors,
And so many dreams
to shine my light away,
The warm thoughts of you and me,
will brighten my day,
filled these thoughts of you and
me,
Warm sunny days and nights,
till morning light brings me happiness
and joy of tomorrow,
No more sorrows,
On this very day
brighten my light away,
The only few warm thoughts of you,
Warm thoughts.....

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-06-10 11:25 AM

vandana, you have made the words feel like a hug. Very nice. ME

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-10 11:41 AM

so lovely to have warm thoughts WITH someone.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-06-10 12:38 PM

SweetVanDana~
Your thoughts have surely warmed my day !
This is lovely, dear.
I smile with easy-remembering of those
whose gentle breezes have blown my way.
Love n' hugs
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-10 06:36 PM

you have such a wonderful way of just reaching out and giving the reader a hug. . .

great job. . .

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-06-10 06:38 PM

Good poem! The composition is just as warm as the title!

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