Ride With Me (Revamped / Repost)

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Open Poetry #14

Ride With Me (Revamped / Repost)

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2001-06-10 10:14 AM

Sorry everyone my muse is
just kind of gone so I have
been trying to revamp some
of my older stuff,
I hope you do not mind,

Ride With Me

Ride with me if you dare!
see what I see
ride on a tail of a slippery wind
sliding in and out
to and fro

Come sail through a valley
skim a roof top see men toil
with no end in sight!
keep riding with me
see what I see

Ride with me were man has
stopped the changing of the land
were he has not yet set foot
ride with me you will see

Race the birds with places to go
see the fawn with no fear
see Mother Nature free of mans
mark upon the land
take the chance see what I see

Follow a steam into a lake
float across the water
feel its coolness
smell the freshness
do you now see what I see?

See Mother Nature at her best
feel the free’ness of your spirit
now wake up!
you are back in your
make believe happy little existence

Want to take another ride?

By, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-06-10 10:25 AM

I'll have to fly 'economy'
but I'm ready to go
Got a window seat and I'm tuned to your station

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2001-06-10 04:29 PM

Cerenity, writer's block is a great chance to look back on what we wrote and maybe smoothen out a few corners. Beautiful poem.
Hope that your muse makes a speedy return.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-06-10 05:40 PM

Cerenity~
Always enjoy reading you - revamped or not !
This was enjoyable !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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