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She's In Love
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She's In Love |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
She's in love and like the sky at sunset even I, stand held in a trance as she's awakened And her colors, carressed by his gentle hands sparkle and flow deep Enriched by that awesome beauty of love Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely and tender write, Tovi. Great work!  All writing comes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tovi, you write so delicately....this is wonderful.... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Aww, Tovi, sweetness in itself...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tovi~ Nice ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a lovely poem Tovi!....I enjoyed it very much! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Thanks so much everyone. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful. Lovely write. |
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