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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-06-09 08:28 PM

Something Beautiful

Something very beautiful passed through the morning air
It touched the bed, and swept across my pillow and my hair
It’s melody poured into depths and gladness of my ear
“I love you, my sweet darling” was the song I was to hear

Something truly wonderful glowed from the waking skies
It danced through leaves and window pane, and settled in my eyes
It was the light of morning reflected in your glance
That warmed my heart and filled me with the softness of romance

Something quite delightful met the dawn’s first gleam of sun
A kiss upon my lips told me that love had just begun
Your silent touch in filtered glow of morning would impart
That something very beautiful would happen to my heart

Elizabeth Santos
June 8, 2001

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-06-09 08:35 PM

Really nice Elizabeth...James

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-06-09 08:39 PM

It's "perfection" and I mean that

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-09 08:43 PM

Something beautiful, indeed....warm smiles here....

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-06-09 08:49 PM

Liz--I can see how beauiful by your words.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-06-09 09:16 PM

Yes, this is very beautiful, how I love the softness of your poetry!

Take care,
Melissa~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-06-09 09:59 PM

LizzieLove~
Yes, beautiful describes it quite nicely.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2001-06-10 03:40 PM

This is soooooo lovely, Elizabeth!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-10 06:28 PM

if the name says Elizabeth Santos, it's always going to be "Somthing Beautiful". . .

and this is no exception. . . it's amazing Liz. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2001-06-10 06:36 PM

Another amazing write Elizabeth!  You can make the words flow effortlessly..it's such a gift you have.....I love the endings of most poems and this one is great!

                    "Something quite delightful met the dawn’s first gleam of sun
                          A kiss upon my lips told me that love had just begun
                       Your silent touch in filtered glow of morning would impart
                         That something very beautiful would happen to my heart"

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