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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Weed  Understand, that I refuse to be put on trial for my pain as this garden wilts vacant from your infliction of strain, I will not be stained with this unfinished sketch of dreams or the bond placed on crystal, shattered at the seams, I will not accept the endless tears from betrayal you did impart embittering cotton candy drops of faith within this heart, I cannot be at peace with a stolen tomorrow from yesterday or the reminder of letting go that never ceases to play, scales of justice tarnish...fate's judge is rendered useless, retribution anulled, your victim - jaded and worthless, a devastating thorn to the soul,it is,when a rose rejects love's seed with scar of spirit, I realize that you're simply just another weed ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is truly powerful Melissa. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for this Melybee.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Stunning ! It's always so nice to read your versatility. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Powerful, powerful, powerful! The most powerful of yours I've read...though I know I've only read a smattering of your works. What has happened since you've been away? Too much pain, I would say, otherwise, how could you ever write of it so well. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, Karilea, Marge and Virgina: Thank you for taking the time out to read this personal piece, these words have longed to break free for a long time now, and although justice can never be served, at least I find comfort in verse and in understanding poets like you! Melissa~ |
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