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pres56
Junior Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 28

0 posted 2001-06-09 06:01 PM

I’m going to cry like a rose cries
i’m going to die like a rose dies
Being cut in half while some ignorant fool laughs
i’m going to cry like a rose.

I want to crawl like an animal crawls
all i want is to feel that life is beautiful
All the pain i feel won’t disappear i know i will always suffer
i’m going to die like an animal then my true self i shall discover

Why isn’t the rain falling down on me?
   i can hear somebodies voice calling me
Shall i wait and see if i can hear the voice again?
  maybe its just the voice of the falling rain.

I want to crawl like an animal crawls
i know i am one step closer to becoming invincible
Because the dead can’t die so let all my bodily functions fail
because all i will do is take a journey to one more hell.

I’m going to explore like a rose explores the universe
so much beauty only by the thawn is it cursed
You can kick me but don’t you pick me like a rose
because i want to grow like a rose grows.

I want to crawl like an animal on my hands and knees
because i am covered in life’s fatal disease
My tears like a river they do flow
why can’t i cry like a rose?.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-06-09 06:09 PM

Welcome to Passions...gentle smile, and a very good first post to start a long career of posts that we will be looking for.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-09 06:09 PM

uh, welcome, this sounds like a 'cry in the wilderness' whom do you need to hear, someone out in cyberspace, or He Who has the Perfect Ear?

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-09 06:12 PM

Powerful, sad write. Welcome to Passons!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

4 posted 2001-06-09 06:14 PM

Much individuality in this that left me much to ponder. Welcome!

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

pres56
Junior Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 28

5 posted 2001-06-09 06:26 PM

Thank you all for the kind welcome

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-06-09 06:37 PM

Welcome, Pres....hope you find Passions to your liking, as I am sure many will find your writing to their liking as well! Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2001-06-09 06:57 PM

Welcome to the family!!! Hope to see more from you.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-06-10 07:01 PM

Welcome to Passions....

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

9 posted 2001-06-10 09:13 PM

welcome and wow what an entrance

pres56
Junior Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 28

10 posted 2001-06-10 09:26 PM

Thank you, so many talented poets here.

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