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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-06-09 05:52 PM


Crescive colours stretch
as we undulate in bliss
golden crest awaits

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-09-2001).]

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Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-09 06:10 PM


Ahh, Poeminister, you can say more with fewer words than anyone I have seen...Best to you this day...smile
Tovi
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2 posted 2001-06-09 06:15 PM


I agree with Logan completely.  You do these wonderfully!  Quickly becoming my favorite reads.  

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-06-09 06:17 PM


Oh, this is good!!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

VAS
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4 posted 2001-06-09 08:14 PM


oooh!


what are crescive colours? colours one sees on the crest of a wave???

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-06-09 09:08 PM


I love it when you make me pull out my dictionary....

striking!

CocoBaci
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6 posted 2001-07-09 06:15 PM


Poe, when you share with us treasures like this you make me smile sooooo bright I just luv it!

Wonderful poem sweetie
*~coco~*


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-09-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-07-09 08:23 PM


PoeMinister~
Enjoyed the imagery enormously.
~*Marge*~

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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
8 posted 2001-07-09 10:15 PM


absolutely beautiful...so touching to one's heart...

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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9 posted 2001-07-10 08:31 AM


very very nicely done...
enjoyed!!!!!!!!

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-07-10 10:29 AM


attenuating
crashing golden wave subsides
extenuating

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2004-04-28 04:12 AM


good one
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