Open Poetry #14 |
Transforming Me (3000th post!!) |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Still seeking sadly, no surcease and ponder how this heart still beats As torn apart as it has been all for the misplaced love of him. A milestone time, decisions made From this day on, his touch shall fade no longer will he fill my mind for I deserve a different kind. I'll take a prince, a cowboy too but not just anyone will do. This time his heart will be pure gold not dappled silver, growing old. Thus, while I learn to wait some more I'm keeping werewolves from my door I'll sit alone and gather thoughts and then will come the one I sought. Perhaps it's true, good times to come till then I'm me, happy as one. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
very nice for a milestone, good luck reaching the next, What ever that might be. Gloom |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Congratulations on not only your 3,000, but on a wonderful read as well, a very fitting way to reach that goal...gentle smile |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
My applause and congrats! Letting go is hard to do, and sometimes very needed. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sandra, this post is something that I needed to read, and I'm so glad to have. Got me smiling here and sending continued strength your way, even though you've got all you need already. You're wonderful, as is this. And happy 3000!!! Golly! *Peace S. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR MARVELOUS 3000 MILESTONE!!! BRAVO!!! Such a promising and optimistic poem of hope for finding new love to replace the sorrow the previous one remained. (big hugggssss) I wish you the greatest lucka nd faith you will find the most beautiful love you could ever dream of and he will be yours eternally! You deserve the most beautiful love so very much, and just know you will find it, sweet Sandra! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Congratulations on your 3000th....hope to read many more from your hand. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Lil' Sis ~~~ you already know that I wish you a very special CONGRATULATIONS! but I also wish you so much of the happiness that you deserve, and you will never be just "one"....there are so many who love you! But that special Prince, or Cowboy will find you....because your spirit shines like the brightest star!! He can't miss you!!! From your big sis... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sandra, congrads first of all on the wonderful poem and secondly on the milestone post. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Congratulations Sandra, on your milestone, your poetry and kind replies are very much appreciated! Kathleen Blake |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Good for you!! I am betting you deserve better anyway. Such power in these words. I love it. Congratulations on your 3000th!!!!!!!!! All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Sandra. . . the power of one. . . in powerful and heartfelt words. . . superb. . . and congratulations!!! ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sandra Wonderful writing. Congratulations on reaching 3000! Poeminister |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
CONGRATULATIONS ME GIRL...and? you save that heart for someone who appreciates you. I tell you lady, ya been casting pearls before swine! LOL...forgot to mention too.."Irie" is very adept at poking bad boys in the eye! <--see? she got to HIM already! Hugs and congratulations..love the strength in this! |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
nice poem, i thought i wrote a lot!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Congratulations on your 3000th post!!! This was well expressed with many emotions, and I relate very much so. I'm glad that you have gained insight and peace~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the thoughts here...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Catalinamoon...What a wonderful spirit strong poem!!! Congratulations on 3000!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Still seeking sadly, no surcease and ponder how this heart still beats As torn apart as it has been all for the misplaced love of him. A milestone time, decisions made From this day on, his touch shall fade no longer will he fill my mind for I deserve a different kind. ================================== your cadence is melodic in this and it should be a morning chant... your mantra of strength... wonderful poem of spirit and renewal... Congrats on your milestone...and your efforts to claim what you do indeed deserve. well done Sandra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone, your comments here mean a lot, this poem is hard to follow through on. But I will!. Sandra |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, CONGRATULATIONS on your 3000th!!! A beautiful poem to close a chapter, and soul touched visions to begin a new one. Time to turn the page to a new and happier beginning. An no one deserves it as much as you... You are a Princess, and as dear a friend as can be. Love you, Elise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Congrats! 3000 is a great accomplishment! I'm sure you will find the one to make you as happy as you'll ever be! In the meantime I'm glad you're content to be you. |
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