Summer's beauty (2 part haiku)

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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2001-06-09 03:37 PM

Beauty Of Summer

The blue skies above
Soft white cotton candy clouds
Stunning bright sunshine

Warm mild summer nights
Sky alive, stunning bright stars
Beauty to behold

I thought of this after I wrote my other summer haiku.. they should probably be together.. but.. oh well

TaraB
[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 06-09-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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1 posted 2001-06-09 03:40 PM

(smiles) BRAVO!!! Another set of beautiful haikus reflecting the great beauty of sweet summertime! (smiles) I love the summer, and your golden heart reflects the majesties of the love and nature of this season! (smiles) I just love your voice, it is always so sweet and filled with magic! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-06-09 03:44 PM

love these summer haiku....well done my friend.

Charisma

rosepetals25

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3 posted 2001-06-09 03:48 PM

Noah - And again.. thank you! You are so nice.. your compliments are going to make me blush

I'm glad you like them. I loveee haiku and I believe that is what shines through. Thank you again

Charisma - It has been a longgg winter this year here in PA.. I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of summer

I'm glad you liked them

Honeybee
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4 posted 2001-06-09 05:53 PM

Tara,

I loved these, especially the first one

Well expressed, I love the image of "cotton candy clouds" awesome work!

Take care,
Melissa~

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-06-09 06:25 PM

These were a joy to read!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-06-09 06:25 PM

These were a joy to read!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2001-06-09 06:27 PM

Beautiful Haikus you wrote there.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

rosepetals25

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8 posted 2001-06-09 06:46 PM

Melissa - Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm also glad you stopped in.. I like to know what you think of my poetry since I'm such a fan of yours

Lone Wolf - I'm happy you enjoyed them.. thank you

Titia - Thank you

And thanks for stopping in.

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