Open Poetry #14 |
Gentle Rain-June 2000 |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A Gentle Rain Whispers Virginia Salter A gentle rain began in the night sprinkling my face to awakened state through the open window that was for catching a breeze. Such changes continue contrasting moments or days before keeping one on her toes and wondering the score How high is the mercury how deep will the puddles flow what drop of sunshine will set the earth aglow? The eaves consistently wash holes in the soil below pecking away at concrete with the constant dripping blow. A metronome seems to be counting the drops that hit the land and no glowing sky from any side seems to promise the drips will end. The trees are still and stand erect proclaiming there’s a pall in the air, yes, from the sky the rain will unceasingly fall. © June 8, 2000 and now, this year on June 9, the sun is pouring down its rays in unforgiving heat |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Oh I love those gentle rains. Wonderful writing, VAS. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Gentle rains can be quite soothing and calm. Beautiful words here, Virginia. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I just love a nice gentle rain; it clears my mind and helps me to relax and the nice cool chill of it in the summer makes me feel fresh and clean! (smiles) I'm so sorry to hear of the heat wave in Oregon, but I guarantee these rains will come back very soon! Wonderful voice Virginia, I love it! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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