Open Poetry #14 |
Sometimes you must pause |
JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
for a moment I wondered did you understand what has passed are you aware of the clouds of the sand that touches your feet I know you think daily wise of bills and teeth cleanings but more wisely you should think of the whole life you are leading but again you just sigh saying I am thinker not a doer never realizing that without thinking nothing worthwhile will ever be done So I sit here while you scutlle I dream my dreams and love it not satisfied by just a balanced book but planning for a balanced life |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JamesBowie, "So I sit here while you scutlle I dream my dreams and love it not satisfied by just a balanced book but planning for a balanced life.." I have to agree completely. To many people get to wrapped up in their day to day stress and forget to that they need to relax and just have fun every once and awhile I liked this TaraB |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
why so many pass on treadmills? missing all the dales all the hills. Thanks, J.B. S Arthur |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Woo Hoo!! I'm not alone!! Loved your sentiment Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I understand this and appreciate the message in it. I loved it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I dream my dreams and love it not satisfied by just a balanced book but planning for a balanced life I am trying to do that...a lot harder than it seems now *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You surely must be the twinbrother of my husband (LOL) but again you just sigh saying I am thinker not a doer That's my husband all over never realizing that without thinking nothing worthwhile will ever be done I don't agree with these lines, for I don't think a lot about tomorrow, but I sure as h.l are doing worthwile things (at least that's what I think, LOL) Very nice poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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