Untitled (help me with the title)

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Open Poetry #14

Untitled (help me with the title)

PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 49
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-06-08 07:29 PM

I'm filled with RAGE
sadness, envy, and hate
I did this to you
but my feelings and yours
simply do not relate

I hope it was worth it
keeping it deep inside you
you made me wait to hurt
and now its all through

What were you thinking?
with her lips on yours?
I'll just leave, don't worry
no hurt anymore

I just wish that you told me
I'm your angel, your everything
I dont want this brought up
when we're reminiscing

I love you baby
I hate to cry
I want to stay here
I can't pass this by

Just tell me you're sorry
that you want to be with me
our love will pass these obstacles
please wait, we'll see

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-06-08 07:55 PM

well from what ive read and interpreted it is about a relationship where one person has
put their lips on someone elses whom they should not have because their main squeeze so to speak really loves them and doesnt want anything to break them up but has to know if this person really loves them or not
since their lips have been on anothers..
i would consider maybe calling it
"Willing to Forgive" but thats just my
2 cents worth and i think since your the
poet who wrote it you should come up with
the title for it,sometimes i have to think a while before it hits me and sometimes the
title comes really quickly

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