Open Poetry #14 |
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Awakened |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
He opened my heart like a cherished gift Slowly and carefully unwrapping delicate layers of light emotion and with tender persuasion he coaxed my very depths, the voice so long unused, into his hands lovingly exploring every part of me and I danced in beauty Gentle shyness turning to sparkling confidence as my soul gazed up at him and knew love Like know other I knew love |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Another brilliant poem from you Tovi, can you by any chance tell me your secret, your style has a hell of a lot going for it, and this is yet another one of your poems which I have enjoyed reading, Many thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Gentle write of love. Beautifully done. Charisma |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
angelswing, thank you so much. Every now and then something good slips out. ![]() Charisma - Thank you! |
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