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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
why did he not came in my dreams i have feelings i want to share, i have thoughts i want to share, i have sadness i want to share, i have happiness i want to share, i want to love her Oh! God why do u make dreams Oh! God why did u make me to meet her? |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, great poem, I know that feeling so well . Enjoyed it . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Its good but want more preciseness. carry on |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
I enjoyed this one very much too Fatthi it is my favourite of yours |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Boshii for good comments i wait for your comments but u don't point out the weakpoints of my poems with XXXXXXXXXXxxxxxxXXXXXXXXX |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwwww fatthi I only see the beauty in new born babies ,,, they are all beautiful |
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