Garnet..............................[repost #12]

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Open Poetry #14

Garnet..............................[repost #12]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-08 11:38 AM

~*~

Garnet

sweet juice of
pomegranate seed
spilling
forth
garnet
d
r
o
p
s

upon her lips

moistened now
and shining
plump and
pleasing,
teasing

beautiful lips

let me taste
the garnet juice
of pomegranate nectar
and I promise
to return

with matching gems
to adorn her
fingers
as my lips upon hers
linger

O for taste
of liquid garnets

~*~

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-08 12:08 PM

very interesting form and a mixture of imagery.. enjoyed the read for its sensual nature..as well as imagery

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-08 12:09 PM

Mmmmmmmmmm-good.

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