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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-21 01:30 PM

Winds Of Change

there is something
in the air
I feel it
everywhere
blowing
is the winds of change
tie down
what you don’t want
rearranged
it blast hot
it gust freezing cold
new floats in
out drifts the old
entwines us
in yesterday and today
yet make room
it is here
to stay
you can try to stop it
with all your will
those strong winds
are
coming still
open up
or
they shall break you down
one way or the other
they will turn you
around

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-21-2001).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-05-21 01:36 PM

Very nice,
I like the short lines,
gives small bits that are emotionally easy to take,
to adsorb.
enjoyed the read.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 05-21-2001).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-05-21 01:42 PM

ok i changed it ......better now? LOL helen

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-05-21 01:44 PM

Well done. I think they ought to use that for a book and/or movie title ... what do you think

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-21-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-21 02:08 PM

Yes, nothing can really stop the winds of change can it? Enjoyed this one, Helen

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-05-21 02:21 PM

You speak sooth. Nicely penned.

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

6 posted 2001-05-21 05:22 PM

Wow I wish I had said that.
I know that I felt it.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-05-22 07:50 AM

OneSlickLady~

Buffeting about
the wind blows free ...
Changing ~
Rearranging ~

Enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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