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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-06 10:32 PM



So Full Of Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

O' my love
on nights like this
I am so full of moon
In silver slivers of light
falling into emerald eyes
beneath auburn tresses
so curled in perfection
Spilling you into my
forevermore~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-06 10:38 PM


Ah Marge, sigh..you do have such a feeling to you and oh those emerald eyes, and auburn tresses, geez..wonderful...gentle smile

Martie
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2 posted 2001-06-06 10:42 PM


Me too, Marge...Me too!
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3 posted 2001-06-06 10:46 PM


Awwww..so beautiful...i am amazed at the way you introduced certain lovely images within such a few lines....
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4 posted 2001-06-06 10:49 PM


well, I'll stop writing now....
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5 posted 2001-06-06 10:54 PM



Logan~
Thanking you
so very much for
such a sweet reply
to my monthly Luna
pennings from this
poetic heart
~Marge

~Martie
You know I
always think of
you when I pen a
'Me too' piece of
the moonglow
Marge~

Kaile~
It's that moon
I tell you - drawing
light from the night
and slinging it into
my little inkwell
~*Marge

~Karilea
You will not !
Grab a moonbeam
and continue to shine
Mix rays of the sun
upon this night of
perfection
Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-06-06 11:10 PM




           Margie moon
         kissing my night
       my dreams with beams
      so full of them bright
      I shall every ray keep
      when wake or in sleep
        as I sing or snore
          for ever-more


Now I'm full of moon  



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7 posted 2001-06-06 11:25 PM


Marge~ I love when you do this with the moon.....makes me sigh and reflect......   ~SEA
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PoeMinister~
How sinister to reply
in sleeping lullaby with
a snore - you tickle me
and I laugh with glee
at a smile that you
left on my door
~Marge

~SEA
With loving eye
I watch you sigh
knowing that your
tides are moved by
the same moon
Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2001-06-07 04:55 AM


I am mooned again...

Enjoyed muchly, my friend

Regards to you Marge,
Sudhir

Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2001-06-07 05:42 AM


I enjoyed not only the beautiful poem at the beginning Marge, but all the continued comments throughout this thread!  You are a marvel ... and you've simply got me smiling here!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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11 posted 2001-06-07 05:56 AM


Margie
moon   maiden
paint  the night,  in
poetry of pure delight,
go  on and shine, be
your best as  you
give   credit
to the
    ~
       ~
          ~
            R
               e  
                s
              t

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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12 posted 2001-06-07 07:03 AM



Sudhir~
Mooning you
in fullest delight
Shining across the
world this night
Bringing smiles
~Marge

~Kit
A moon of
smiles falls on
my face at finding
your reply in place
Thank you for a
sunshine day
Marge~

Kethry~
Look at you just
glow and glow across
the pages your words
do flow-My friend
I enjoyed so !
~Marge

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2001-06-07 09:20 AM


Nice way to paint the poem..form and words fit so well.. good work!
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14 posted 2001-06-07 11:56 AM


Beautiful thoughts, and painted images....

hugs to you... my friend...


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


ethome
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15 posted 2001-06-07 01:54 PM


Aw Marge you're just such a romantic and the words, yes the wonderful words, make me want to come back..........forevenmore!
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16 posted 2001-06-07 02:52 PM


Ohhh Marge I like this one very much, very mystic and sensual or is it sensual and mystic, well either way its perfect. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

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17 posted 2001-06-07 02:56 PM


*sigh* Marge all I can do is to view this beautiful moon and to sigh again...as luna shines so bright through your pen.


((hugs))
Charisma

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18 posted 2001-06-07 08:50 PM


Beautifully done, Marge! Very lovely, indeed!
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19 posted 2001-06-07 09:23 PM


Do I ever love being "mooned" by you Marge, and the imagery was awesome!
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20 posted 2001-06-07 10:05 PM



~CPatHair
Glad to know you
enjoyed Luna's view
That's exactly what
I do too She glows in
welkin sky - leaving
such gentle sighs
Marge~

GreenEyes~
Across the night
I know that you are
watching her Luna waltz
with the twinkling stars
Sharing a glow for all
to see - Thanks for
sharing with me
~Marge

~ETHome
Romantic thoughts
swept with such light
landing in a gentle heart
on this very special night
Finding lovers that glow
with the ecstasy of
sweet Luna show
Marge~

OLIAS~
Mystically she
rises - sensuality she
brings - So I guess that
you are right 'bout both
of these things - Catch
a glow of her show
She is glowing
~Marge

Charisma~
In full view - this
Luna dance - giving all
the lover's a chance to
poeticize in such a way
as to wish her to stay
She will return again
next moon's full
~Marge

~Denise
Such beauty of
this wonder is never
lost in eye of slumber
She commands that we
write poems of her
stunning beauty
Marge~

Mysteria~
Mooning has become
second nature to me now
I think I have to write 'em
so that perhaps a fantasy
cow will always be able
to jump over a moon
~Marge

~Thanks
Everyone of
you for such a
fantastic fun time
Full moon done
She smiles
Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2008-01-23 11:08 AM



~Absolutely amazed
that once I possessed
such an abundance of time
to write the moon in rhyme
in a profusion of Luna verse
cross the path of our Universe
seeking to leave the glow of
such pure everlasting love
found nestled in the file
of my archived thoughts
in keep for sharing~


**Just enjoying all of these moon rhymes**
Yep, I sure am~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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22 posted 2008-01-23 11:39 AM


Ah these are wonderful Marge!
So good to read them once again.
And also great to see so many members names from  past years.
Hugs and prayers that your recovery will be swift.
Love you, Nancy

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23 posted 2008-01-23 05:07 PM


Wonderful indeed, dear Marge, moon-lady!
Wishing you quick healing from your eye-surgery, so that you will be able to watch "the wondrous nightly companion" in a true mesmerizing close-up.

Nancy-Enchantress, I miss you so!! How are you?

Love and hugs to you both.
Margherita



icequeen
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24 posted 2008-01-23 06:19 PM


Marge - this is soooo beautiful. I'd love to share it with my poet niece, she of the emerald eyes and auburn tresses.

~Caroline~

P.S.
My dear poet friend, you have mail

Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2008-01-23 07:06 PM


Thank you ALL so much, my friends~
Caroline ... by all means share~
Enchantress ... love you~
Margherita ... you too~

***I'll be back better than ever, I promise***

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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SmartChick
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26 posted 2008-01-24 03:42 PM


Marge this is fantastic. I've said it before, and will say it again, you are so talented.
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