Open Poetry #14 |
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So Full Of Moon |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
So Full Of Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ O' my love on nights like this I am so full of moon In silver slivers of light falling into emerald eyes beneath auburn tresses so curled in perfection Spilling you into my forevermore~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ah Marge, sigh..you do have such a feeling to you and oh those emerald eyes, and auburn tresses, geez..wonderful...gentle smile |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Me too, Marge...Me too! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Awwww..so beautiful...i am amazed at the way you introduced certain lovely images within such a few lines.... ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
well, I'll stop writing now.... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Thanking you so very much for such a sweet reply to my monthly Luna pennings from this poetic heart ~Marge ~Martie You know I always think of you when I pen a 'Me too' piece of the moonglow Marge~ Kaile~ It's that moon I tell you - drawing light from the night and slinging it into my little inkwell ~*Marge ~Karilea You will not ! Grab a moonbeam and continue to shine Mix rays of the sun upon this night of perfection Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Now I'm full of moon ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I love when you do this with the moon.....makes me sigh and reflect...... ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ How sinister to reply in sleeping lullaby with a snore - you tickle me and I laugh with glee at a smile that you left on my door ~Marge ~SEA With loving eye I watch you sigh knowing that your tides are moved by the same moon Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am mooned again... Enjoyed muchly, my friend Regards to you Marge, Sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed not only the beautiful poem at the beginning Marge, but all the continued comments throughout this thread! You are a marvel ... and you've simply got me smiling here! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Margie moon maiden paint the night, in poetry of pure delight, go on and shine, be your best as you give credit to the ~ ~ ~ R e s t Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Mooning you in fullest delight Shining across the world this night Bringing smiles ~Marge ~Kit A moon of smiles falls on my face at finding your reply in place Thank you for a sunshine day Marge~ Kethry~ Look at you just glow and glow across the pages your words do flow-My friend I enjoyed so ! ~Marge ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nice way to paint the poem..form and words fit so well.. good work! |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautiful thoughts, and painted images.... ![]() hugs to you... ![]() Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw Marge you're just such a romantic and the words, yes the wonderful words, make me want to come back..........forevenmore! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Ohhh Marge I like this one very much, very mystic and sensual or is it sensual and mystic, well either way its perfect. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* Marge all I can do is to view this beautiful moon and to sigh again...as luna shines so bright through your pen. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! Very lovely, indeed! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Do I ever love being "mooned" by you Marge, and the imagery was awesome! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~CPatHair Glad to know you enjoyed Luna's view That's exactly what I do too She glows in welkin sky - leaving such gentle sighs Marge~ GreenEyes~ Across the night I know that you are watching her Luna waltz with the twinkling stars Sharing a glow for all to see - Thanks for sharing with me ~Marge ~ETHome Romantic thoughts swept with such light landing in a gentle heart on this very special night Finding lovers that glow with the ecstasy of sweet Luna show Marge~ OLIAS~ Mystically she rises - sensuality she brings - So I guess that you are right 'bout both of these things - Catch a glow of her show She is glowing ~Marge Charisma~ In full view - this Luna dance - giving all the lover's a chance to poeticize in such a way as to wish her to stay She will return again next moon's full ~Marge ~Denise Such beauty of this wonder is never lost in eye of slumber She commands that we write poems of her stunning beauty Marge~ Mysteria~ Mooning has become second nature to me now I think I have to write 'em so that perhaps a fantasy cow will always be able to jump over a moon ~Marge ~Thanks Everyone of you for such a fantastic fun time Full moon done She smiles Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Absolutely amazed that once I possessed such an abundance of time to write the moon in rhyme in a profusion of Luna verse cross the path of our Universe seeking to leave the glow of such pure everlasting love found nestled in the file of my archived thoughts in keep for sharing~ **Just enjoying all of these moon rhymes** Yep, I sure am~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah these are wonderful Marge! So good to read them once again. And also great to see so many members names from past years. Hugs and prayers that your recovery will be swift. Love you, Nancy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful indeed, dear Marge, moon-lady! Wishing you quick healing from your eye-surgery, so that you will be able to watch "the wondrous nightly companion" in a true mesmerizing close-up. Nancy-Enchantress, I miss you so!! How are you? Love and hugs to you both. Margherita ![]() |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Marge - this is soooo beautiful. I'd love to share it with my poet niece, she of the emerald eyes and auburn tresses. ~Caroline~ P.S. My dear poet friend, you have mail ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so much, my friends~ Caroline ... by all means share~ Enchantress ... love you~ Margherita ... you too~ ***I'll be back better than ever, I promise*** *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge this is fantastic. I've said it before, and will say it again, you are so talented. |
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