Open Poetry #14 |
Giving in to love |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The day broke into my night. I was still sleeping, when you kiss me so sweetly. Waking my senses, stiring in me the need for you. While I pretended to sleep, your opportunistic touch explored as you enjoyed, and conquered every corner of me. Until I could not resist, giving in to love. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Lovely, leaving this reader in fond memories. Thank you for that. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll give in to this any time. . . you always manage to capture these little moments so well walker. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
well written Walker!!! enjoyed |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I give...I give!! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) The sweet passionate romeo strikes again with another romantic sigh! (sigh) It is so very amazing how just one touch can drive two lovers together in heavenly embrace and how there is no resistance, it's all magic love. (sigh) Your heart always floods with true love, and your loving words always inspire me! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hope you didn't resist too long Walker Love it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautifully written. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
walker, Just wonderful! I liked this alot TaraB |
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