Open Poetry #14 |
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Ocean's Senryu |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
![]() ~*~ simple is, as does quell the swell that you have wrought simply put, kiss me ~*~ I asked not of you to carry me through on crest of these, passion's waves ~*~ but I lay, now beached upon sandy shores, 'neath sun completely, undone ~*~ Captain of the Seas come, and give your soul to me your tides drew me in ~*~ |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And your poem drew me in. Lovely writing, always. Michael Proust- |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
![]() ![]() superbly gentle with a slight touch of the melancholy |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful....just beautiful this touch of love found in Ocean's waves. Charisma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lovely poem. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
~*~ I have heard your plea and my essence can be yours you must go asea ~*~ my tides carry you from sandy beach to my side where you shall remain together we sail upon wave and through the trough to our new kingdom ~&~ you shall rule with me though you alone rule my heart surrendered with love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
........I'm left breathless......... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
![]() together we find this ocean can't cool our heat waves only fan flames ![]() ~SEA~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"Captain of the Seas come, and give your soul to me your tides drew me in" ************* And what if I did .....come to you with a love you never knew would u let my waves carry you to where life begins anew ****************** Thank you.......... ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely stunning work! Love in sea so blue Sculpting hearts of summer fling Sifting passion's sand ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful, well done... PM |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
One word: BEAUTIFUL! ~Tier |
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