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KHUSHBOO (Smell)
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KHUSHBOO (Smell) |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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KHUSHBOO Smell kiun maray mun ko ittna satatay ho tum Why you are teasing my heart so much kiun maray tun ko ittna turpatay ho tum Why you are putting my body in agitation so much Muhabat ki khushboo bassa kar dil maen maray After settling the fragrance of love in my heart kiun maray gi ko ittna jalatay ho tum Why you are burning my heart so much Zinda ho kar bi zinda naheen haen mugur I am not alive while being alive Kiun sookhay phoolonn maen khushboo basatay ho tum Why you are settling fragrance in the dry flowers Piyar ki rah maen uun battuk janay k baad After wandering like this in the way of love Kiun wafa ki munzil mujay dikhatay ho tum Why you are showing me the destination of love Abbi to tamamm ummer parri hay muhabat k wastay Still there is resting a long life for love Kiun piyar k samunder maen mujay bahatay ho tum Why you are flowing me into the sea of love Maray dil ki bussti ujar janay k baad Waseem While after destrying the town (settlement) of my heart Waseem Kiun Ujray gulistan maen phool sajatay ho tum Why you are decorating the flowers in the destroyed garden ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, wow, beautiful...but I never expected the painful ending...but then do we ever expect it  BRAVO |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 I like the way you "co-write" with your native language.Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very good finale! I have trouble writing in one language. Well done. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wasi~ this is beautiful.....I love how you do your poetry in both languages...  ~SEA |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
It was nice to be able to read this in both languages! The first has such a beautiful sound when read aloud and the second ended in a sad surprise... I enjoyed this! Debbie |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
it is beautiful waseem .....you will never find the answers to your questions..it is part of the game called love ,, and even women do not know why they do it ....just suffer |
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