Open Poetry #14 |
sins of the parents |
zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
a brand new branch has sprouted upon our family tree a time of joy and happiness but not alas for me friends,a night of passion then on to pastures new none of them expecting the arrival of you confusion and much panic i saw in both their eyes both too young for looking into a babies eyes making a disision as friends to stand together to raise this child apart as father and as mother how were we to guess the secret to be learned at your first gasp of breath the bridges would be burned two visits,just two hours is all we had with you a harsh and cruel thing to stop us seeing you so now the fight begins for rights for us to share your life with all its dreams a chance to show we care i hope in time to come ill glance upon that tree no longer feeling sadness but smiling happily |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting work..a sad story told in a few words.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ZZZ, Interesting read said well. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
zzz...beautiful words...but I'm not sure I understand? It's probably right in front of me, but I'm sure I'm missing the true beauty of the piece by my confusion. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nicely written.. a sad song you sing..i hope things work out soon...some tend to forget, its the child who suffers the sins of the parents... hugs, g |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
thanks to you all for your comments its nice to feel so welcome i cant get over all the good stuff there is to read thanks again zzzzzzzzzzzz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thought provoking and again? Forgive me for not reading sooner---I am making up for lost time, and so glad that this was here waiting for me. Thank you! |
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