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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-06 10:51 AM

Silence dressed seductively
To catch my attention
And lure me into
Paying the price
For such pleasures
As she offers those
Who search for the
Touch of intimate
Understanding

Embracing her
I am still empty

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-06 10:54 AM

Silence thunders....

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-06-06 12:04 PM

Well expressed. Enjoyed.

PM

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2001-06-06 12:56 PM

very excellent writing....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-06 01:02 PM

Yes, silence thunders ... but thunder is the residue of lightening and nothing more. Silence is the residue of thought.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-06-06 01:02 PM

Touch of intimate
Understanding

Desire, need...met with empty embrace. The sadness of this is overwhelming.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-07-03 04:09 PM

Wow...this is terrific, and just loose enough to allow for liberal interpretation. This could apply to so many things, as well as the literal. Well done on a thoughtful write!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-07-03 04:41 PM

Wow, you said a lot here. Good summation of the feeling. Been there.
Sandra

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2001-07-03 04:59 PM

silence
screams
such evil lover
attaches to heart
deprived discover
now
fill me
under skin
the hollow
within

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-07-03 06:34 PM

and in that emptiness. . . the heart falls. . .

well done Sir. . .

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OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

10 posted 2001-07-03 07:53 PM

This intrigues me, and makes me balance literal against interpretive, I enjoyed very much, very thought provoking. Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

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