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Common Ground
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Common Ground |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Find that shared Place where the Your shadow And mine Overlap when The sun Is hot. In the center Of this spot Drive a stake That passes Through Both our Hearts If we die We were Monsters Anyway If not… We’ll tie our souls With braided Cords of chance To this Common Ground |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I love this, Captain... "Tender heat tames the beast within & since our hearts are at stake, let us claim shadows..." ~Tier |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
a most UNcommon write....and I enjoyed it thoroughly.... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
really nice...enjoyed the thoughts this left me with.....  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"We’ll tie our souls With braided Cords of chance To this Common Ground" Enjoyed the thoughts here. Nicley done. PM |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I so agree with Lady in White....is this a bit of R and J in a touch of Shakespeare? so romantic, yet so painful |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Hey...Partner....Rumor had it that you had been persuaded to drop by. Can't stay longer than to express my appreciation for your talent. Lots of kind folks here....but maybe you already knew that. You be nice to them. I've been fading (in a poetic sense) for some time but I think that I have one last post in me.....for you. Take care. Bob PS If you ever happen to hear from my nemesis....Kate....give her a hug for me....then duck to get out of the way of her left hook. |
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