Open Poetry #14 |
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Passive Refusal |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
She sat there, No rings on her hands bone thin, Dirty hair, A blank stare, A shell devoid emotion, Lacking voice, Makes no choice, No sign of encouragement, Emptiness In distress, No plea for help ever sent, She sat there, Tattered cloth, battered skin. Gloom |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Eventually that's what happens. You can batter a body for only so long, then the mind just shuts down. Such a shame what people do to each other. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Gloomy, indeed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
and today I received a prayer request from a teen for her friend whose boyfriend is abusing her...the teen says she "can't knock any sense into her" strange choice of words, considering the request perhaps too many think that's the only method some people understand |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, inot2B, Yes the mind is capable of blotting out A world of things when pushed. Torment to pain, the realm of the sane All eclipsed by the shattered mind. Thank you, Interloper For taking the time to read and respond. Thank you, VAS, Physical abuse has become too commonplace, Manipulators too bold. Glad you responded. Gloom |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad. Excellent expression of utter despair. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A great job of speaking on a subject too often swept under the carpet, I really liked this one. By the way, your site is awesome, and will be going back as you have really done a fantastic job! Thanks. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Denise, You recognize what Gloom is, A compliment. Thank you, Mysteria, Your words are very kind. Gloom |
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