Open Poetry #14 |
Moon |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Waves slowly crashing on sandy shores, controlled with pull of iridescent moon. Rising upward in majestic splendor, ancient face in full array. As upon the horizon, it makes its way. Highway of serenity leading to dreams, creating an avenue of peaceful bliss Surely as the tides, the couple drawn, pursuing the lure of its lighted path. Following their hearts to the waters rim, Feet being kissed by feathery foam, bodies bathed in a soft white glow. Tender looks between the two, as ever was when the moon was new. Two souls bound by the lighted moon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh I am reading this..the moon full in my window...how lovely |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely moonlit imagery. Enjoyed this very much. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ The title drew me in - but isn't that the way of the moon ? 'Feet being kissed by feathery foam, bodies bathed in a soft white glow. Tender looks between the two, as ever was when the moon was new. Two souls bound by the lighted moon' I enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i enjoyed this very much |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Waves slowly crashing on sandy shores, controlled with pull of iridescent moon. Rising upward in majestic splendor, ancient face in full array. As upon the horizon, it makes its way. ============================== Feet being kissed by feathery foam, bodies bathed in a soft white glow. Tender looks between the two, as ever was when the moon was new. Two souls bound by the lighted moon ============================== this is so lovely wonderful imagery and vocabulary all wrapped up the enchantment so many of us have for Lunas pull.. what is it with poets and the moon *smile* well done poet sir she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A very, very quiet write...peaceful.... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Oh wow... *soft sigh* ~Tier |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Seeing the ocean as a "highway to serenity" makes this for me. Thank you. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sweet One..You'll forgive me for missing this, I'm sure. It IS exquisite in its imagery and feel. I love this. It will be one of my favorites, I'm sure. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm just going to quietly tuck this one away for safe keeping.......... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me too, tucking away, in my moon file! Smooth this was, real smooth. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Logan ... you've captured this tender moment in time so vividly, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
This is so very beautiful. I caught my breath. Magic. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh,Paula, I am glad the moon was right there at that time then...gentle smile Thank you, Poeminister, your opinions are aways important..gentle smile Marge, gentle smile, I am happy that you did Thank you Watersign6, and a senior member already. so your words mean alot to me..gentle smile Janet Marie, oh, the pic of the moon like that, and your so kind kind words. Thank you...gentle smile Lady, you live up to your name with your kindness...gentle smile Ahh, Tier, I am glad you liked...gentle smile Interloper, Sir, from one who makes words live on the screen, it makes it for me that you read and replied, Thank you Ahh, gentle one Temptress, you know you would be forgiven for anything, someday I hope I will be as good as you, but think that is impossible...gentle smile SEA, from you, you have made my day...gentle smile Ahh Mysteria, coming from one that made the word smooth, glow, I hold that to me as the greatest of praise...gentle smile Kit, thank you so much for the read, and your comments, as you are regarded highly...gentle smile Ahh, Tovi, who will be so widely read, as you are so very good, I hold that very close, thank you...gentle smile To all of you, who were so kind as to read and give such nice thoughts, you humble this old one...gentle smile to all |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
gentle nudge...I love this. It is only fair for it to have another round. |
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