»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #14
»
Venus Rising - Seventh House
| Open Poetry #14 |
|
Venus Rising - Seventh House |
|
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
|
Venus Rising ~ Seventh House ~*Marge Tindal*~  Draping soft starlight ... 'cross ebony sky Venus now rising ... on wishes that fly Spider web moonbeams ... crochet the night Completion of new love ... before morning light Cant of enchantment ... dreams brought to bear Circle of wishing ... will find me right there Seventh House of Libra ... dear Venus, if you will A love ... ~one true love~ to re-ink this quill ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge, marge, my dear margie....grinning from ear to ear here! You are a natural! (and pssst...I happen to have a highly aspected Venus myself!  ) Hope all your lovely love spells work for ya! Loved this!  |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ You sweetie ! I 'fess up to thinking of you in this line - 'Cant of enchantment ... dreams brought to bear'  And ... to think they DID leave you a message ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The image of true love reinking the quill...beautiful! |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Thanks for enjoying this and for being a part of this family of poets. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie, you clever lil' poetess you!  I loved this, so lovely is the thought, I've missed your work so much! Take care, Melissa~ |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enchanting piece, Marge! Lovely! |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This caught me on my right side...then it turned me around and delighted me well on the other... I think I needed this, and no Libra am I.... |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've outdone yourself here Miss Margie...love the format!!! And psst...I must admit I've missed your words!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
****SPRINKLES**** WHOOOOHOOO ... ... ... ... ... BRING EM ON...WITH A SIDE OF RHYME yer so cool Miss DeMilo LOL love the whole idea of this inspire way cool and groovy too   tis never easy being a moth, |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ It's good to see you ! Gonna go read your happy angel post ! *Hugs* Denise~ You give me *smiles*. Karilea~ I'm pleased to know it encircled you. Devina~ Glad you came to visit. I must admit ... I've missed YOU ! JanetMarie~ LOL ! @ ***Sprinkles*** Thanks, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I was bespelled by this, and you have the right blood to do this (poet's blood)write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
||
|
Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
BEAUTIFUL MARGE THIS IS A TREASURE TO CHERISH SHALOM |
||
|
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Beautiful truly beautiful, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Thank you from this poet's heart. SoaringEagle~ You are such a wonderful uplifter of my spirit. Be well, sweet love. Cerenity~ Thank you so much, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
send some ink this way if you get enough to spare, will ya? very creative Marge! |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, just to use a well-used word here at PiP... AWESOME!!! Regards, Sudhir |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl let me borrow this please, it's utterly divine. You are sooooooooo excellent. I'm enchanted, enthralled and carried away with this. Absolutely excellent my sweet sister of heart Take care love as always Mushy  [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 05-21-2001).] |
||
|
Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Eloquentia perfecta. |
||
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Another masterpiece! Betty Lou Hebert |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, I am a Libra and I loved it. Venus, goddess of love that you are ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dixie~ If I find a little extra, I'll direct it your way. Good to see you gal ! Sudhir~ And in return - a sincere thank you ! MarshaLove~ Go for it gal ! It is sooooooooooo good to see you ! Love you.  PoeMinister~ I humbly thank you. BettyLou~ Just my little heart at play ! Thank you so much. InterLoper~ Thank you VERY much for your reply. Libra is a good sign to be ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This jewell slipped by me Marge. However, I'm so glad that I was able to finally read it........very enchanting.... "Spider web moonbeams ... crochet the night" Now that's one heck of a line...Wow1 The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you soooooooo much for flipping the back pages for this one. The line you mentioned is also a favorite of mine in this piece. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- hi there, friend.. this is really beautiful. i like it much! love ya, vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
||
|
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Almost missed this one and I like it a lot. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. (http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100) (can't seem to get my link to look like a link) [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-18-2001).] |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Durn it's good to see your smiles here ! I have a new muse ... Oh, yeah ! Her name is Leandra ... and she's such a dear ! You'd just LOVE her ... She's prissy in an elegant sort of way and mindful of her words. Titia~ Glad you enjoyed it ... they never 'go away' ... Try dipping and diving in the Archives some day. Lots in there to enjoy. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I love it when you heart is tickled! This was wonderful! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, I loooove this I'm so pleased it's reappeared, I have a friend here who wants to read some of my favourites, so I'm letting them browse. One of those quite eternal times love alwayslove as always and thank you Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very very nice, perfect scenario. Wonderful poem. Sandra |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ This Libra's heart STAYS 'tickled' most of the time Thanks, gal. MarshaLove~ Lovie, how sweet of you to share ! I appreciate your sweet reply. Hello, Marsha's friend ! ! CatalinaMoon~ I sure enjoy knowing you like it. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
