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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-19 11:04 AM



Venus Rising ~ Seventh House
~*Marge Tindal*~

Draping soft starlight ... 'cross ebony sky
Venus now rising ... on wishes that fly
Spider web moonbeams ... crochet the night
Completion of new love ... before morning light
Cant of enchantment ... dreams brought to bear
Circle of wishing ... will find me right there
Seventh House of Libra ... dear Venus, if you will
A love ...  ~one true love~  to re-ink this quill

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-19 12:12 PM


Marge, marge, my dear margie....grinning from ear to ear here! You are a natural!  (and pssst...I happen to have a highly aspected Venus myself!   ) Hope all your lovely love spells work for ya! Loved this!  
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2 posted 2001-05-19 12:19 PM


Serenity~
You sweetie !
I 'fess up to thinking of you in this line -
'Cant of enchantment ... dreams brought to bear'

And ... to think they DID leave you a message ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-05-19 01:19 PM


The image of true love reinking the quill...beautiful!
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4 posted 2001-05-19 06:39 PM


JLR~
Thanks for enjoying this and for being a part
of this family of poets.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-05-19 07:12 PM



Margie, you clever lil' poetess you!    I loved this, so lovely is the thought, I've missed your work so much!

Take care,
Melissa~

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6 posted 2001-05-19 07:33 PM


Enchanting piece, Marge! Lovely!
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7 posted 2001-05-19 07:35 PM


This caught me on my right side...then it turned me around and delighted me well on the other...

I think I needed this, and no Libra am I....

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8 posted 2001-05-19 08:01 PM


You've outdone yourself here Miss Margie...love the format!!! And psst...I must admit I've missed your words!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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9 posted 2001-05-19 08:10 PM


****SPRINKLES****
WHOOOOHOOO ... ... ... ... ...
BRING EM ON...WITH A SIDE OF RHYME  
yer so cool Miss DeMilo LOL
love the whole idea of this inspire
way cool and groovy too    

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

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10 posted 2001-05-19 10:04 PM


Melissa~
It's good to see you !
Gonna go read your happy angel post !

*Hugs*

Denise~
You give me *smiles*.

Karilea~
I'm pleased to know it encircled you.

Devina~
Glad you came to visit.
I must admit ... I've missed YOU !


JanetMarie~
LOL ! @ ***Sprinkles***
Thanks, love.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-05-19 10:35 PM


Marge,
I was bespelled by this, and you have the right blood to do this   (poet's blood)
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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12 posted 2001-05-20 12:00 PM


BEAUTIFUL MARGE
THIS IS A TREASURE TO CHERISH
          SHALOM

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13 posted 2001-05-20 01:16 AM


Hi Marge,

Beautiful truly beautiful,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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14 posted 2001-05-20 10:36 AM


Kethry~
Thank you from this poet's heart.

SoaringEagle~
You are such a wonderful uplifter of my spirit.
Be well, sweet love.


Cerenity~
Thank you so much, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2001-05-21 04:25 AM


send some ink this way if you get enough to spare, will ya?

very creative Marge!

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16 posted 2001-05-21 05:25 AM


Marge, just to use a well-used word here at PiP...

AWESOME!!!



Regards,
Sudhir

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17 posted 2001-05-21 11:46 AM


Margie girl let me borrow this please, it's utterly divine. You are sooooooooo excellent.
I'm enchanted, enthralled and carried away with this. Absolutely excellent my sweet sister of heart

Take care love as always
             Mushy
                  
                



[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 05-21-2001).]

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18 posted 2001-05-21 12:18 PM


Eloquentia perfecta.

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19 posted 2001-05-21 02:47 PM


Marge:  Another masterpiece!

Betty Lou Hebert

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20 posted 2001-05-21 03:14 PM


Well, I am a Libra and I loved it.  
Venus, goddess of love that you are ...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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21 posted 2001-05-21 07:16 PM


Dixie~
If I find a little extra, I'll direct it your way.
Good to see you gal !


Sudhir~
And in return - a sincere thank you !

MarshaLove~
Go for it gal !
It is sooooooooooo good to see you !
Love you.


PoeMinister~
I humbly thank you.

BettyLou~
Just my little heart at play !
Thank you so much.


InterLoper~
Thank you VERY much for your reply.
Libra is a good sign to be ! !

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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22 posted 2001-06-15 11:23 AM


This jewell slipped by me Marge. However, I'm so glad that I was able to finally read it........very enchanting....

"Spider web moonbeams ... crochet the night"

Now that's one heck of a line...Wow1

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

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23 posted 2001-06-15 07:31 PM


ETHome~
Thank you soooooooo much for flipping the back pages for this one.
The line you mentioned is also a favorite of mine in this piece.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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24 posted 2001-06-18 09:41 PM


Marge-

hi there, friend..
this is really beautiful.
i like it much!  

love ya,
vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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25 posted 2001-06-18 10:13 PM


Almost missed this one and I like it a lot.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. (http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100)  (can't seem to get my link to look like a link)

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-18-2001).]

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26 posted 2001-06-18 10:35 PM


Vicky~
Durn it's good to see your smiles here !
I have a new muse ... Oh, yeah !
Her name is Leandra ... and she's such a dear !
You'd just LOVE her ...
She's prissy in an elegant sort of way and  mindful of her words.

Titia~
Glad you enjoyed it ...
they never 'go away' ...
Try dipping and diving in the Archives some day.
Lots in there to enjoy.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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27 posted 2001-06-19 04:54 AM


Oh I love it when you heart is tickled!  This was wonderful!

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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28 posted 2001-06-19 06:49 AM


Margie girl, I loooove this I'm so pleased it's reappeared, I have a friend here who wants to read some of my favourites, so I'm letting them browse.

One of those quite eternal times love   always

Take care
love as always
and thank you
Mushy
    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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29 posted 2001-06-19 01:17 PM


Very very nice, perfect scenario. Wonderful poem.
Sandra

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30 posted 2001-06-19 07:23 PM


Mysteria~
This Libra's heart STAYS 'tickled' most of the time
Thanks, gal.

MarshaLove~
Lovie, how sweet of you to share !
I appreciate your sweet reply.
Hello, Marsha's friend ! !  

CatalinaMoon~
I sure enjoy knowing you like it.
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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