Open Poetry #14 |
you are near |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
In the sun rising to meet the morn and the steaming coffee cup I still pour to visualize your sip and close of eyes exhale, you are near. In the heat of the day as I smile back and reach fingers that can’t help disappear into the mirage but heaven is not untouchable, forever, you are near. In your voice, soft vibrations of comfort linger, your aftershave dallyies in passenger seat memories, wherever I go, you are near. In the pushing forward of my hips to import the memory of your touch to the close of night’s eyes holding my pillow tight, you are near. [This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such soft and tender expressions of beautiful love! (sigh) Oh jellybeans, I always have these thoughts too when I look at the smallest things, when I look at the moon, smell a rose, lick candy, lie in a daffodil field, thoughts of my dream girl come swimming in my head, flooding me with passion. (sigh) Such beautiful sentiments! Your love is so very lucky to share your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
noah, thank you...such a tender reply, you have a wonderful heart...and sigh...my "love" is in heaven...but he is still near in my heart... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so tender... I think it touches everyone who knows what it's like to hold someone in their hearts long after arms are empty. Well done, dear lady! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
JB...your love's touch is stll tender...helen |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Tender indeed.... nice visuals of everyday things and happenings which remind us of more.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I knew when I saw the title.... we seem to have the same ache today... beautiful bittersweet write JB take care of you jm she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
suthern...you know what your 'well done's mean to me thank you lady helen...thank you cspat..glad you liked thank you JM...oh if only we could turn back time.....sighs and hugs.....thank you lady |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this broke my heart (((((hugs))))))) Kathleen Blake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jellybeans, Thats about as near as you can get without being there. Well done. Sy |
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