Open Poetry #14 |
You ask who, what , when, where, why, and how . . . |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you ask who I love and I respond I love you you ask what I love and I say I love your soul you ask when I love and I say eternally you ask where I love and I say wheree’r you are you ask why I love and I say you are God’s gift you ask how I love and I say with all my heart totally and completely Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Well then, you've certainly answered her question.... but you know? Another one will always pop up.... Enjoyed! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is sweet....sometimes we need to be told... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely! Kathleen Blake |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes,this is beautiful....so very sweet....and yes, sometimes we do need the words |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovely sweet piece.....enjoyed it very much. Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ I tried, yet another question is inevitable, isn't it? Paula ~ Yes, we all need to be told Colleen ~ A lovely response froma lovely lady. SEA ~ Thank you for your "sweet". *sigh* Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Charisma ~ Almost missed you I am glad you enjoyed. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love the way that "mirrored", as there is no better way of communication in the world! I truly enjoyed this poem and its structure too. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
i do like your poem it is excellent. i can see you like to write poetic poems about how u feel. thats good cause when you meet that right one u will be noticed as a sweet and kind person. stay real and treat the ladies right with honesty and true love, and you will be successful in their hearts. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Interloper, this is such a sweety, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Such a tribute of loving expression you pen'd. It could only warms one soul. A beautiful token of a poem. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mysteria ~ If you like my work I know I have succeeded Julian ~ Thank you for your kind comment. Titia ~ You are the sweety Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i wish i knew how to get that cool clapping smiley into my posts cuz you so deserve some major clapping with this one,i love it |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Interloper, Each question well-answered results in a good or better question... This one is fantastically done... regards, sudhir |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Watersign6 ~ I appreciate your 1derful applause and faithful reading of my work. I am honored indeed. Sudhir ~ Thank you for the fantastic comment my friend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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