Open Poetry #14 |
The night was made for us |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The night was made for you and me. Nothing can distract us, we were meant to rule the night. And in this world of sudden changes, one thing remains the same forever, that is my love for you. In the night we paint our love, among canvas we stencil our touch. While playing out this love, because the night was made for us. [This message has been edited by walker (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is truly tender and sweet I hope you don't mind me thinking so it's luscious like a cashmere sweater on one's sweetheart [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very nice read. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed this one, it was honest and caring and sweet well done |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
loved reading this tender piece. Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) So magically tender and beautiful! I love every word in this; it made me wish that I was living the night with my dream girl under the starlight! (smiles) Yes, when you and your love are embraced together, the night is enchanting, for true love is heavenly. (smiles) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
lovely lines.... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
enjoyed this one immensely |
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