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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-05-21 03:26 AM

In hopes that he does not mind my taking liberties with his name.

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My friend I feel you here,
When I'm around,
On my passionate writing waves,
Your eyes find their ground.
Ever completely within my soul,
Ever inviting me into your whole.
Demeanor of sweetness forever entranced,
Glowing smiles not solely by chance.
Write to me of your dreams and send,
Them carrying a whisper on blue sky's wind.
I'm ever growing within your embrace,
But a child to your elder face.
Guardian you are, you say it well,
On your heart, you wear the spell.
An enflamed light within your spirit,
In your smiles I often hear it.
The gifts you offer of your mind,
Send my thoughts with my soul entwined,
Into the vast ocean of blissful demise,
No other sweetness would compromise,
Were you to ever cease to defend,
My faith and truth would you, mend.
A gentle gift you give it well,
To be ride within your loving swell,
Of wiser knowledge you have known,
In another life, me, you've known.
So face me here when you do read,
I feel your wisdom planting its seed.
And although your name you do not leave behind,
I feel you now with your spirit inclined.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-05-21 05:43 AM

What a fantastic piece of poetry and I sense you DO feel him there in spirit, so I am sure he will respond. I like your "writing waves" I hope this one lasts a spell.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-05-21 05:55 AM

Wonderful flow...James

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-21 12:41 PM

Your comments all flatter me well. I don't get to thank people often enough anymore. Thank you..

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-05-28 05:17 PM

Respond? How could one not respond to gentleness, a tender soul who humbles me with her friendship and words of such feeling. Mind? I am honored that you used my name in the company of yours. A gentle smile to your thoughtfulness.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-28 05:21 PM

a lovely tribute to your friend

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-05-28 05:29 PM

ahh..
Logan,
Dearest, how wonderful to see your comments although I know you've been here reading and read this already.

You knew it before I wrote it though..I'm sure of it.

Irish Rose,
Yes. He is well worth this tribute. Thank you for reading.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-05-29 07:03 AM

Temptress,this is so moving an i so enjoy your amazing talent an how everything flows so well within your poems an Logan is one lucky friend to have you write this about him

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-05-29 06:51 PM

it's always nice to have someone who supports you and encourages you to be better. . .

great job!!!

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