Open Poetry #14 |
At the Foot of the Tower |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter she entered the door at the foot of the tower it was on the leeward side and away from the sea the crashing surf could be heard inside the stone walls its rhythm in time with her slow, methodic steps up the spiral staircase as she reached the ninth step she began to hum a tender tune from her childhood memory each note came, too, methodically as each step and crashing wave the faint glow of moonlight dimmed with each passing of the pulsing lantern above each in time with the other as if perfectly orchestrated finally her steps brought her and her tune to the third landing there, on the twenty-seventh step, she stopped both her footsteps and her humming and gazed out over the blackness that was striped with gilt-edged waves she opened the door and stepped to the railing said a tender, gentle prayer and watched the earth, glistening with starlight and fireflies, rise to meet her, eagerly, as she said “Good-bye.” Nov. 1999 |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
so very good, so very sad, such a permanent solution to temporary problems, sigh..very good building to the final end...gentle smile |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thanks, Logan, for reading and responding. [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful work, and, noting the date, I note your progress Well done. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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