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My Angel Child
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My Angel Child |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I look at your picture, your arms laying across a mirror. Your hair just done so, bright eyes, pools of light brown. How sweet and serene you look eyes staring... straight forward. Angelic face, porcelain skin dressed in white, an angel child. In the mirrors reflection, a diffferent angle, all together. Eyes looking... off to the distance, a different perception. This same face, different in image how can this be, the one and the same. Eyes piercing...searching acting so michevious. This angelic child, one so dear stretch your wings, full extension take your time, don't fly to soon To my daughter of 13. With Love. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was just so special! I know she is going to love these poems you will do for her. I can sure relate to two looks out of one child, as the "little devil" is always in my angel's little mind I can tell you that for sure! Loved it, hope she does too. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LatinPassion~ So nice to read this lovely poem about your daughter. Magical creatures they are - 'In the mirrors reflection, a different angle, all together. Eyes looking... off to the distance, a different perception.' They 'see' beyond our image of them ... stretching, reaching out with their minds ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
lovely absolutley lovely  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What a beautiful tribute to your daughter... shes at that wonderful age of discovery... enjoy all its many gifts...both angelic and impish well done poetess  |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Mysteria~~Your kind words of praise you've given me- I thank you very much - in more ways that I can say, you touched my heart. She was thrilled when she read the poem, and gave me a great big hug! ******* Marge~~I appreciate your stopping by for the read. It was a photo of her on my desk, staring at me everyday. Thank you. ************ Watersign6~~ Thanks for the read, and the smiley!! ************ JanetMarie~~AHHH!!!!!! What a picture!!! A wonderful blessing to have you add an angel picture. I am most humbled and honored for your token - and most graciously accept it. Your thread has touch my heart. ********* Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful, lpassion..I had to stop in to tell you so...huggsssss M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
aw, I loved this!!  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I look forward to those years, beautiful LP...  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
utterly piece you have penned here L Passion, showing your love for your daughter. it seems that they grow up so fast, too fast...especially as they are on that beautiful age between being a child or a young lady. love your thoughts. (hugs) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow!!! This is such a beautiful tribute to your loving and beautiful daughter, who will grow to rise her wings to the greatest extents. I can see such loving resemblance between your golden heart and hers! (smiles) May she take her time and think about her dreams, where she then shalt fly to stardom! (smiles) Sooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
I also see this as a lovely tribute to your daughter..and to all girls of this strange, wonderful AND terrible time in life! My oldest daughter is almost 10 and in some ways I love watching her grow, in other ways I wish I don't want the time to come where I really do have to start letting go..... I hope you share this with your daughter...  I can't control |
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