Open Poetry #14 |
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Lost Melody ---an Acrostic poem--- |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Languishing in the pain Of my very own creation Searching silence praying To hear a single song adored Melody of yesterday Everydays lost tomorrows Listening strain ears desperatly One refrain one single sweet note a Doorway to the past nailed shut now Your melody is you, lost to me forever "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." [This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SilentSongs~ The haunting refrain of another's sweet melody lingers long after the song is gone. Quite emotive writing. Well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
...listening strain ears desperately... you play delicately with words and their meanings give voice to each wave of thought as one takes time to simply relish your work... a beautiful write, this.... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
sing to me my love bring your melody softly forever sharing Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Memories remain melodies made of time's flow singing tommorow PM [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Melody of yesterday Everydays lost tomorrows -------------------------- How many melodies we lose along the way.....?? I try hard not to think about that..... A truly touching and so much said in its few lines. Thank you for the read. ********************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lost melody ? I think not is is indeed quite melodious. Nicely done |
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