along this road we have been

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Open Poetry #14

along this road we have been

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-06-04 09:34 PM

The dealer of fate sits before me
Please hand me a card of smiles
for I have has travelled these roads, and their dusty stoney miles.
Time has not been good, and the pain inside me long
I have marched to the same old tune, the tune of a love lost song,
Now roads stretch once again before me, I look into the summer sky, and deep inside my heart there's a boy about to cry.

Rich

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-06-04 10:31 PM

"card of smiles" my favorite line!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

2 posted 2001-06-05 02:36 PM

absolutely amazing! love it

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-05 02:39 PM

This is very touching. Weep not for the road before you. It will lead you to the future. Brighter than you've ever imagined, my friend.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

4 posted 2001-06-05 02:53 PM

thanks all for your words of wisdom! - I shall add them to my never ending quest for this thing known as my life...yes, hold the spark for it is small, its power unimaginable.......

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-06-05 03:28 PM

I love the strength in this! very good!

~Tier

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