Open Poetry #14 |
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my completion |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
from the crease of dawn she sprang splashing feet in shallow puddles wearing springtime yellow she dances until her face turns into daylight When I return home she greets me with a crushing hug and a kiss her smiles lighting up the evening like a million swirling fireflies this is my daughter she completes my life A real man |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What lovely verse to write of for your little one! Kathleen Blake |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
thank you rose, this is far more satisfying than writing of sadness |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JBowie~ This is just the sweetest piece of happiness ! ![]() I'm sure she makes your day a better one ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi James, This is so sweet, children are such a blessing and your love for her shows in this little beauty, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
It is a love like no other, isn't it? You've captured that well. ![]() Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful!! Children are truly a treasure. Tender write, James. ![]() All writing comes |
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